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remember what it was like to rejoice
back to the same old revolution
remember when you made your choice
living in the endless seclusion
i left and when i was gone i see,
i was where i wanted to be.

how many times did you think it was
the time that you would give up?
how many times did you think it was
the life that you would live up
how many times did you think it would be,
the cause that you would fight for
how many times did you think it was
the light that you would long for
how many times did you think it was gonna be the time like the time before.

love, war, god, heaven, hell, right wrong, justice, karma, property, honesty.

dont ask me to beleive in anything.
©2004-2009 ~babacancer
:iconbabacancer:

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remember the last time you beleived in something, only for it to crunble and melt right in front of you?

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:iconaiya-toshikino:
:thumbsup:

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I am Mortimer, and there's a body in the window seat.
:iconnilufer:
"i left and when i was gone i see,
i was where i wanted to be."
brilliant hussain! very nice..
:iconwar-machine:
many a time did we believe in something, then we were let down...
nice peom. no, great poem.
very emotional.

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Bahraini: noun (pronounced Bah~rain~ee) ~ people who come a dime a dozen
:iconchicsdigmohawks:
hey buddy I miss you and this thing made me miss you even more I love your stuff it keeeps me from killing myself
:iconbabacancer:
hey miss you too, i miss everyone all the time, i live in a pile of sentimental emotions. pc was messed up, recently got fixed.
if what you say is true then you have given me a satisfaction beyond description

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i crumble in the dusty corner, i dissapear into a memory of what i once was.
:iconbabacancer:
thank you nilu.

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i crumble in the dusty corner, i dissapear into a memory of what i once was.
:iconsocial-anarchist:
mmm.. hussain i like this alot that i am gonna add this 2 my :+fav:

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U can't change the world... But u can change what is 2 come..
:iconmaho0ya:
wow..
its beautiful..
i honestly dont think that anything i say can give this poem the credit it deserves...seriously, all compliments aside, no words i know can possibly describe how amazing this is..
:iconchicsdigmohawks:
hehe I wouldn't lie to you I have really missed looking at all your stuff and reading it.... You are so great....

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