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goodbye by ~babacancer:iconbabacancer:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Rhymes


When its finally done
And you are feeling down
All the people you'll leave behind
Will just go on and live their lives
All the friends you think you'll miss
Are just a memory you'll soon dismiss

Just a tragic smile
Right before you cry

Trying to tell me its alright

Just a simple lie
Right before you fly

I already know its not alright

All the promises that you will make
you'll try to keep but then you'll break
all the feelings that you'll fake
ill know about cause ill be there
all the anger all the rage
will go away once you turn the page

JUST A TRAGIC LIE
RIGHT BEFORE YOU FLY

DON’T TRY TO TELL ME ITS ALRIGHT

Just a simple smile
Right before you cry

And we both know its not the end of life
©2003-2009 ~babacancer
:iconbabacancer:

Author's Comments

since im at my last school year ive been feeling sad and sentimental. now i know its not a guy thing to be sad and sentimental ( at least were im from)i dont give 1% of a realy small shit.
its about leaving the ppl u know and getting on with your life (eventually)

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~Fallenspirit Oct 11, 2003, 5:36:45 AM
Beautiful. I love this poem, it's elegant, I love that in poetry, good job
:iconbabacancer:
~babacancer Oct 11, 2003, 5:46:37 AM
thanks

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ur stuff is just amazing
:iconfallenspirit:
~Fallenspirit Oct 11, 2003, 5:48:19 AM
My stuff is just random thoughts that float up to my mind or recollections or the past. I love your stuff, it's perfect
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~babacancer Oct 11, 2003, 5:51:41 AM
i get what ur saying actually

my dad used to beat me up too and hit my mom he doesnt any more im too big for him.........now he just leaves me alone
i anyway ill be watchin you
:iconfallenspirit:
~Fallenspirit Oct 11, 2003, 5:53:59 AM
Cool as. You teach him a lesson. Protect your mum. I just wish my dad would quit drinking.
Where do you get your inspiration?
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~antraxdk Oct 11, 2003, 8:02:05 AM
extremely nice. +fav.
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~war-machine Oct 11, 2003, 8:49:26 AM
as always.... very beautiful...
and true...
do u think we'll split up after skool? we dont have 2 u know...
well ur right... i wont argue... lets all cheer up! =)

--
Bahraini: noun (pronounced Bah~rain~ee) ~ people who come a dime a dozen
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~the-fisherman Oct 13, 2003, 6:31:11 AM
being the unsentimental piece of rock i am i shall say this : lets leave all the worry for later...concentrate on pissing evryone off right now..ill read this in 4 months THEN ill cry..nice nice stuff...just way too early(for me anyway)...
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